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Caranore
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PostSubject: Ryuu Zankishoto   Ryuu Zankishoto EmptySat Sep 19, 2009 2:47 pm

Name: Ryuu Zankishtoto aka Kaze no Majin (Devil of the Wind)

Age: 21

Bloodline:

The Shikotsumyaku or dead bone pulse, lets them use their bones as weapons. there are currently five dances.
Genin- 1 dance
Chunin-3 dances
Jonin-4 dances
Kage- All dances

The 1st dance is the Flowering Blossom Dance. The user sprouts sharp bones from all around his body, and begins the dance, looking like a whirlwind of swirling blades.

The 2nd dance is the Alpha Dance. The user creates a dopple ganger out of bone, which charges the opponent. This is like Kankuro's puppet skill, as the doppleganger will trap the opponent, creating a cage out of its ribs. The user will then shoot bone like spears from its arms, intending to spear the opponent. Even if the attack misses, the user will continue to use the bone like spears as his weapons, attacking in a style much liked the unarmed Tiger style of the monks.

The 3rd dance is the Dance of the Earth. The user digs deep into the earth, concealing its chakra from the opponent. Creating a doppleganger to distract the opponent, the user concentrate on the bones growing from its body, and causes the entire battlefield to erupt with bone like spears coming from the ground. The user wil repeat this skill unless removed from the ground, attempting to dice the opponent up. As this is a bloodline skill, it takes a fair amount of stamina, but requires little chakra.

The 4th dance is the Dance of the Devil. The user created two rapiers out of its bones, and takes a stance much like the monk's Mantis Style. Striking pressure points with horrifying accuracy, this dance is named from a specific set of pressure points that is normally struck, causing the opponent to experience paralysis and blinding pain. The longer the user lets the opponent stay in that state, the closer they come to recieving the mind damage equivalent to Tsukiyomi from the pain

The 5th and final dance is the Dance of Doom. It can only be cast once, when the user is near death, but lasts the entire battle once cast. This dance causes the users bone structure and every bone that was created using this users bloodline to crumble into dust, letting them become one with the ground and the wind. They have complete control over the bone fragments and are able to mix the bone fragments into the wind, making it virtually impossible to trace them as this uses very little chakra, only enough to move the wind. The user can form a weapon from any amount of bone fragments, and after the attack the bones will dissolve again, preparing or another attack. Once the battle is over, the user will reform himself, but will quickly fall into unconciousness.



Rank: Kage of the SUn ((I dont know the term))

Classification: Expert

Village: Village of the sun.

Alignment: Neutral. Good and Evil acts occur at the same rate.

Appearance: Ryuu Zankishoto Anime-boys-anime-guys-3910891-374-550

The only difference is the a sword hanging diagonal across his back. See weapons and equipment for the picture.

Mental Weakness. Aka. Weak against some genjutsus, but not others. His brain functions differently, so he could be weak against a D-Rank, and then strong against an S-Rank, or vice versa.

Physical strengths: Large chakra capacity and physical strength.

Weakness: Constantly needs to train chakra control.

Personality: Ryuu is a very calm and collected soul, most of the time. Like most people, he does have his pet peeves, and while those are far and few, his temper when pushed is a site to behold. Most would count themselves lucky to escape with just a few cut marks on their bodies.

He also enjoys reading out by the lake and walking in the mountains, taking in the fresh air. An idealist at heart, he is a realist in the head, and knows when things have gone too far. However, when in a fight, he acts somewhat insane, going all out as soon as he has the full permission to.

Outside battle, he is normally talking strategy with his underlings, or filing paperwork. On his off days he is located at the training field, ever perfecting his stance and form, along with jutsu.

Part of his time is also spent studying the anatomy of a human body, and improving his accuracy hitting the nerve centers and pressure points. He also has mastered the Mantis Style of unarmed fighting, using his knowledge of the human anatomy to utilize this style to the full capacity.


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PostSubject: Re: Ryuu Zankishoto   Ryuu Zankishoto EmptySat Sep 19, 2009 2:47 pm

History:
Spoiler:

Speciality: Ninjutsu / Kenjutsu. Wind affinity

Learned jutsus:

Fuuton • Daitoppa is a Ninjutsu technique which utilizes the Wind Element. After bringing his hand to his mouth, Orochimaru will blow a large blast of wind capable of leveling almost anything in its way. A variation of the technique involves a smaller blast of wind which gets ignited with flame.

Katon • Goukakyuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals, draws chakra from their mouth into their chest and them immediately exhales it. They then blow a stream of fire which erupts into a large sphere of flames. To better manage the flames the ninja will bring their hand to their mouth to control it.

Katon • Endan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. This jutsu allows Jiraiya to emit a jet of fire from his mouth. While not stated, this is probably the same or a similar jutsu to the one Jiraiya uses in conjunction with Gamebunta to do Gamayu Endan.

Fuuton • Kaiten Shuriken is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. To utilize this technique, Setsuna will first be under the influence of Yomi's evil medically enhanced chakra. This will grant him Wind chakra, which he will use to send his double bladed kama through the air as spinning disks. He can then launch these disks at his target like shuriken. Because he manipulates each individually, he can attack his target from multiple directions.

Kage Bunshin is a Jounin level Ninjutsu technique. When Naruto stole the scroll of seals, he learned this technique as well. The normal Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja that lacks any substance. The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. This makes Kage Bunshin an excellent training method if the ninja has the chakra capacity and stamina to maintain the Kage Bunshins for an extended period of time. This allows the ninja to essentially reduce the time it takes to train and learn with each clone added. This is especially true when used with Tajuu Kage Bunshin.

Fuuton Ninpou • Kami Oroshi is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. To utilize this technique, Setsuna will first be under the influence of Yomi's evil medically enhanced chakra. This will grant him Wind chakra, which he will use to generate a whirling vortex of wind which he can send snaking towards his target.

This technique can be used in conjunction with Hibashiri to create a powerful fire and Tsuchi Kairou to contain and focus the explosive blaze.

Name: Fuuton: Rasen Shuriken
Range: far
Rank:S
Element: wind
Description: A rasengan infused with wind chakra that can be thrown. weak against fire attacks and strong against lightning, can only be used once per battle

Name: Katon: Fire rasengan (lemme know if you have a better name)
Range: Close to far ranges
Rank: S
Element: fire
Description: Rasengan infused with Fire chakra. can be used to create a stream of fire 200 feet long and capable of melting most materials. can also be thrown and causes a massive explosion



Elements: Wind = Dominant
Fire = Recessive

Weapons/items: Ryuu Zankishoto DragonTalonFantasySword_540px

Strapped across his back mostly. Black Sheath.

Ryuu also carries around a flute, playing to relax himself when he can.

Goals: Restore his families lost honor from when they deserted Konohagakure before he was born.
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Caranore
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PostSubject: Re: Ryuu Zankishoto   Ryuu Zankishoto EmptySat Sep 19, 2009 2:48 pm

More jutsu >.<

Feel free to disapprove of any

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Character sheet
Character: Sky
Health Points:
Ryuu Zankishoto Left_bar_bleue100/100Ryuu Zankishoto Bduv6a  (100/100)
Chakra Points:
Ryuu Zankishoto Left_bar_bleue50/50Ryuu Zankishoto 15g9oaw  (50/50)

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PostSubject: Re: Ryuu Zankishoto   Ryuu Zankishoto EmptySat Sep 19, 2009 3:12 pm

just a slight problem with some of what's written there XD

well you see... here there isn't a land of fire or a raikage...
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Character: Aibu
Health Points:
Ryuu Zankishoto Left_bar_bleue100/100Ryuu Zankishoto Bduv6a  (100/100)
Chakra Points:
Ryuu Zankishoto Left_bar_bleue5/5Ryuu Zankishoto 15g9oaw  (5/5)

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PostSubject: Re: Ryuu Zankishoto   Ryuu Zankishoto EmptySat Sep 26, 2009 10:37 am

Quite a few things i noted caranore..

1.You arent a kage,this must be approved by the admins.You would have to start from A.S if you want this account to rp and so forth..

2.I noticed you using 4 different elements.This isnt a big problem,but not having earth and lighting as your elements that you use means in my opinion that you havent mastered them.Thereforse using A -Rank and Kage level jutsu of that type wouldnt make sense because you cant really control it.I say go with 3 elements and take out a few of the jutus for now...

3.Your have some genjutsu of a high rank in there..Being a ninjutsu user and not having gen down would put you at a disadvantage against a mediocre genjutsu user.Also i cant see you using such high level genjutsu effectively without some gen strength.So you need to clear that up.

4.I see no mental or physical strengths or weaknesses.

5.No need for a classification..

6.Sky said it no land of fire either..So use the ones we have or wait until the staff disscussion on new villages is finished and decided.

Personality,Apperance,Backstory,and Weapons look good..
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PostSubject: Re: Ryuu Zankishoto   Ryuu Zankishoto EmptySat Sep 26, 2009 11:06 pm

Haha, well, we worked out the kage thing. I didnt realize i still had genjutsu in there. I thought the only one was clairavoyance. Ill look into that.

And as this was just a quick copy and paste dealio, I didnt pump the mental/physical stuff in there. Ill touch up on that later
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Character: Aibu
Health Points:
Ryuu Zankishoto Left_bar_bleue100/100Ryuu Zankishoto Bduv6a  (100/100)
Chakra Points:
Ryuu Zankishoto Left_bar_bleue5/5Ryuu Zankishoto 15g9oaw  (5/5)

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PostSubject: Re: Ryuu Zankishoto   Ryuu Zankishoto EmptySat Sep 26, 2009 11:42 pm

Well we havent seen the creation of a village just yet..So give it a few xD

Look forward to the updates.
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Character: Sky
Health Points:
Ryuu Zankishoto Left_bar_bleue100/100Ryuu Zankishoto Bduv6a  (100/100)
Chakra Points:
Ryuu Zankishoto Left_bar_bleue50/50Ryuu Zankishoto 15g9oaw  (50/50)

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PostSubject: Re: Ryuu Zankishoto   Ryuu Zankishoto EmptySun Sep 27, 2009 5:56 am

lol well actually I was considering making a 4th village, since vito is actually on alot of RP forums and such so he should be alot of help =)
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PostSubject: Re: Ryuu Zankishoto   Ryuu Zankishoto EmptySun Sep 27, 2009 7:37 pm

Mmk. I edited. Ignore the kyuubi/shichibi in the history, cause i doubt im allowed to have that XD.

One that note, Im note sure what other weakness/strengths would be as im a half awake.
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Character: Sky
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Ryuu Zankishoto Left_bar_bleue100/100Ryuu Zankishoto Bduv6a  (100/100)
Chakra Points:
Ryuu Zankishoto Left_bar_bleue50/50Ryuu Zankishoto 15g9oaw  (50/50)

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PostSubject: Re: Ryuu Zankishoto   Ryuu Zankishoto EmptyMon Sep 28, 2009 5:17 am

<.< .... >.> ..... <.< .... well.... I might be nice and let you have a tailed beast since you're going to be kage/mod anyway.

it just means I kinda have to allow for iazu the cyborg kage xD
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Chakra Points:
Ryuu Zankishoto Left_bar_bleue50/50Ryuu Zankishoto 15g9oaw  (50/50)

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PostSubject: Re: Ryuu Zankishoto   Ryuu Zankishoto EmptyMon Sep 28, 2009 7:39 am

I ♥ you Caranore o-o
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PostSubject: Re: Ryuu Zankishoto   Ryuu Zankishoto EmptyTue Sep 29, 2009 7:27 pm

Your Welcome Iazu

*wonders which one i actually have*

Negative Shichibi. MEaning wind control. I dont go by kishimotos bullshit. I follow the real legend, which states the Shichibi is a earth based badger thingy. Therefore negative would make him wind.
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Chakra Points:
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PostSubject: Re: Ryuu Zankishoto   Ryuu Zankishoto EmptyWed Sep 30, 2009 3:37 am

o.o I'd allow that logic.
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Character: Aibu
Health Points:
Ryuu Zankishoto Left_bar_bleue100/100Ryuu Zankishoto Bduv6a  (100/100)
Chakra Points:
Ryuu Zankishoto Left_bar_bleue5/5Ryuu Zankishoto 15g9oaw  (5/5)

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PostSubject: Re: Ryuu Zankishoto   Ryuu Zankishoto EmptyWed Sep 30, 2009 9:38 am

We have cyborg and tailed beasts x.x,looks like i'll need to be able to use instant transmission,ssj4,and build my laser on the moon xD

Anyway if sky approves,seeing as you are staff i dont mind..But you will have to hash out some major drawbacks if you want this rpc to be playable..Meaning at least 5-10 posts till you can call on your tailed beast or so forth.
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Character: Sky
Health Points:
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Chakra Points:
Ryuu Zankishoto Left_bar_bleue50/50Ryuu Zankishoto 15g9oaw  (50/50)

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PostSubject: Re: Ryuu Zankishoto   Ryuu Zankishoto EmptyWed Sep 30, 2009 10:01 am

lol yea xD well I think the drawback bit was obvious... the only reason I even approve of the tailed beast and such is because of 2 things. 1. they're both staff and answer to me... 2. I'm bored and want to spice of this naruto-based DnD type game. =]
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